Eh
Having a Newgrounds logo dosen't automatically make you're flash better. Voted 1. Needs sounds and effort.
The animation is really a bugger too. Tweens like that get you nowhere.
Sharpen your skills, and show us your best then.
-Duffi
Eh
Having a Newgrounds logo dosen't automatically make you're flash better. Voted 1. Needs sounds and effort.
The animation is really a bugger too. Tweens like that get you nowhere.
Sharpen your skills, and show us your best then.
-Duffi
Meh
Really that was the only thing I could think of the first time i saw it.
Taking a second look, Im sure what to say now:
It's fine for a first flash. I remember doing some half-hearted shitty stickman slideshow.
You've done better. Far better than most people for sure. But because it's youre first flash, it shoulden't be on newgrounds. Newgrounds is a nice for for feetbacks, but stick to friends, familily etc. Newgrounds can be harsh at times.
Really, im not sure weather or not this movie should pass or be blammed. I gave you an 2, which goes for nothing new, or interresting.
Phoenix wrong has been done a gazilion times by now, so it isen't original.
So, stick to flash, develope your skills.
Thumbs up from me :)
Good Moral- Short Story
At first i thought it would be a typical Stick war. To my joy i find something that wants to go deeper than that.
I think youre on to something, but the blobs(Certainley not stickmen) really kicked down the ratings on Graphics. Some of the scenes were very good, until thoose blobs jumped in. The sound was good too. The music goes perfectley for the movie!
Good job.
Full of effort, filled with bad graphics
Theres nothing better than a movie, filled with effort,history, smooth animation, and good graphics.
This one lacked much, but the effort was there. It feelt like it anyway.
This movie has so much potentiel, if only it weren't filled with sprites. (Many off them badly ripped)
Looking through the piles of sprites, i actually found some good bagrunds(The beach fx, not in Doctor Eggmans lair!)
Work on the graphics, it would really improve the movie if you made all the graphics yourself. A combination of ripped sprites and decent graphics don't mix well.
The animation needs a touch too. At one point at the movie, where Knuckels and whatever are fighting, they launch at the robot sonics in the air. And the sonics float in the sky like idiots. A major put down, as nobody could stand THAT still in the air.
The sound needs a kick. The text bubbles were there troughough the movie(They were placed okay, need to be scalled a bit down)
At some points theres suddenley a sound for a character. Either its a total mute, or not.
I voted 3 for you. This is portal worthy. Just keep improving thoose flashes :)
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